by LeoDavis
I liked this story a lot, it was very realistic, and i was able to relate to it. It had passion and lots of it, which was very fun. It was a great story. Keep the good work up.
Dear Leo What a wonderful story, having all the right moves described in such a delightful way, my only regret is that I didn't lose my own virginity in such a beautiful way. Having become a fan of yours, I notice your stories have the gift to turn me on ,in a
quiet gentle way,by the time I'm half way through I find my nipples
standing out and pants are soaking, and I can smell myself, as my day has yet to start must take my shower, see to the children,and off we go on another day.
Love Jem
I loved your story of passion and gentle deflowering of the virgin (small "v") Mary. I would cast a number of delicious red haired starlets but my first choice would be Marg Helgenberg of CSI in the part......although she has played a more slutty wench in the past.
Very sexy.
Ladies, read this and beware.
If your hubby is even remotely hot and--god forbid-- a professor do not leave him alone for any reason or for any length of time, and if you still actually like him after many years of marriage, wear him out with sex so he does not have energy for any other girls!
Nevertheless, this was an orgasm-inducing and steamy story, but a little too long.
I sure enjoyed your tale. The settings and word opictures made it come alive for me.
I need to read all of your submissions.
Of course you wrote this in 2004 and it is 2006 now. But I hope you may se my comments
I know a long, slow build-up isn't for everyone but man, oh man, you build a great fire!
Thanks for sharing. Bluejacket01