by EnCarta
Love your stuff, some of the hottest writing I've seen. Keep it up - I will!
The core of the story is ok but it gets confusing and hard to follow in some locations. What harms a decent story is the over use of ... which is spots there are more of that actual words; 99.99% of all uses of this space wasting, confusing, or thought gathering spot by the author can and should be removed.
It was amazing to see the power struiggle bvetween the two dominant women i thr story, Mrs Flethcer's seduction was amazing, but Gloria's was great as well, cant wait to see what Gloria has in store for him... Please bring us more chapters
I love having Debra fucked wearing her nylons, garter belt, heels, skirt and sexy bra and silky blouse. Maybe she has an 18 yr old daughter who likes to dress sexy and have cum all over her face and clothes.Keep up your great stories.
Yet again you show your amazing ability to right great stories. Keep them coming.
This was a great story like your others. How about a high school girl wearing nylons and heels and a pleated skirt and satin blouse to school to seduce her male teachers?
How about a group of cheerleaders wearing nylons and heels to the opponents locker room, seducing them, making them loose the game because the sluts drained them of all their strenth?
That section of the story where Gloria services David in the coffee room in front of the sink, causing him to spurt off in his pants did it for me! There's nothing that excites me more than the thought of a mischievous female naughtily jacking a guy off to an explosive, cloth-staining orgasm through his trousers!
Once again, BRAVO!! Thank you for your kinky, fetish-oriented sense! It comes through wonderfully in your stories.
PS- the more trouser tent jacking, the better!! *pant!*