All Comments on 'Seduction in the Train'

this was supurbly done..it strung me out as it went from one thing to another getting me some what excited in he unraveling of your tale.. obviously she had aa very lovely veloptuious body as you described.. might you have described your own smile ..sny way please continue writing ..loved your approach..fel fre to respond if you'd like fred

Your story line was excellant and the ending was very good. I didn't see it coming.

Well done.

It is a great story and the end is simply superb! Perhaps it can be a great movie in the near future. The work and flow of thought is very smooth. Nicely sized paragraphs too!

It's a pleasant change to find a story with a plot written with a seductively exotic voice.

For a first attempt this is great. The stoyline is amazing and the flow of thoughts is real smooooooooth! Keep it up.

gr8 story. gr8 narrative. quite simply one of the best

t story was great frm starting to end..........

i have'nt such a twisted ending............

Thanks, that was a nice story, with a lot of attention to details, that's usually missing in stories based on India here. Perhaps a little more attention to detail--so we didn't have lines like "his panties", would've made a lot of difference. Very good for a first attempt.

You could write many more stories! Dont stop! Keep up the good work.

The story is offered by the national leage for diabities prevention... Just kidding. Thanks foe a fun read.

terrific story ...

way different from the 'standard' porn found in literorica

this may be a bit of an exageration .. but this is a cross between Agatha Christie and Nick Carter !!

i saw it comin but i thot her father was the mastermind...very well written, thanx 4such a compellin read

-indranil

Hi... Great Story... I must appreciate your writing skills... There are very few Indian writers here at literotica.com who have such story telling abilities... Keep up the good work... Hope to read many such stories from you in future...

Cheers

atul

Nice Story however I failed to understand the compelling need/requirement which forces Sonia to seduce Rawat ??

Nice story but does not seem realistic