All Comments on 'Seduction of Tamanna Ch. 04'

A big lie. "The cock that transformed her from a nice loving wife to a cock hungry slut."...She always was a slut, a whore. part 2 seems a copy and paste of part 1, no new nuances in it...

excellent writing. very good build up to every part of the story.few suggestions - make tamanna wear sexy Indian clothes like low saree,choli blouses etc and as she has been already transformed into a slut now,make her try new avenues like the pizza delivery boy,ravi's friend or even manoj's boss....first make tamanna wear sexy attire so that she can lure other men

Given 5 stars. keep writing

I loved this series! Continue writing more stories

The poor husband is going to hurt , they both need a beating. But this author is a chucky writer.

nice, please more.

nice & super Don't Stop this Series please Continue................

Sadhu.... you r the best.... I must admit... this is the best story I ever read on net on any of these type of sites. Plz plz plz.... keep writing this chain of stories. Make tamannas husband cuckold. make manoj fuck her in the office. at his home... on the terrace, in the balcony, out of her house in open... you are excellent.

continue the story.......bro

very much seductive and full of lust.Please write next episode of Tamanna's increase desire of getting more and more fuck from Manoj and gradually making her husband cuckold.

Very interesting.....please continue story. Don't stop it ...please bro continue it

Plzz sadhu post the next chapter plzzz I beg you .......

I like it very very much plzzzz

Hey plz continue the story plz plz I am waiting

Sadhu plz continue this story more and more plz plz plz plz plz plz

Plz make More Tamanna sex story plz plz

....why you stop plz make Tamana story's plz

Write more plz you left that fucking anonn hanging.

Learn english well enough to write or don't write at all. This was technically terrible.

Learn about plot lines and plot development. Take a course in fiction writing or something.

Get an editor.

Quit sending, or encouraging, absurd anon comments that attempt to prop up a terrible story. They all basically say the same thing, so you either wrote them or coached others to do so. Perhaps some are fellow natives of India with a misguided sense of loyalty. It is blatantly obvious; your writing and storytelling is very poor. No honest, literate person would rave about a story this bad.

Of course, you could learn to write in your native tongue and never be bothered again. Or further torture the readership here.

Your story..both prose and grammer as well as basic words are atrocious! Either u were busy bunking class to watch porn or u never went to a proper school! Bothways ... no future here..better write for ur own enjoyment and keep it to urself! No normal reader will give u a thumbs up! Yeah... and seeing the same spelling mistakes from so many anons who are praising your story tells me that besides writing this pitiful pos.. u musthave spent double the time becoming anon and pimping ur own gutter story, ...get real and get a job!