All Comments on 'See, See - TV'

Very cleverly done, also languid and sexy. Excellent descriptive passages, too.

I like your style. Slightly overwritten sometimes, and the parentheses overused, but the fantasy and the language are always appropriate. Somewhat inspired by good victorian erotica in some places, but always rewarding.

Your stories are always a treat!

One of your best, Shaun. I couldn't disagree more strongly with one of the anonymous comments below ... this story isn't over-written in the slightest; the parentheses give it a unique, stylized "voice" I found completely amusing and entertaining. The situation is highly erotically charged, in that inimitable style of yours, and I nearly followed the narrator right down that enticingly slippery slope he nearly made me believe he was sliding on. But that wry, mockingly self-aware voice had me giggling as I was also deliciously aroused. Mmmmmm. Wonderful.

sexy AND funny

What a delightful, sensual, erotic tease! Slow and stealthy, the reality begins to dawn about 2/3 of the way through. The iced gespachio and associated stiches were completely forgotten until the last paragraph. i nearly peed myself.

One word: brilliant!

Thank you.

-a