by mykaltrent
A bit picky, I'll admit. But the id and ego (and super ego) are ideas from Carl Jung, not Freud.
Otherwise, great story.
You're a talented writer. I loved the back and forth they had, and the Freud reference.
This is too rare a genre. And you captured this lightning well! I have always wanted a twin, or a clone of myself. A deep hot fantasy. Thank you!
I enjoyed this little story very much. Good sense of humor and very well written. And then you come with your "picky" observation. Not Jung but Freud: Id, Ego and Super Ego.
Research before you speak through your ass.
Just wanted to say I love this story so much, and that last comment was literally the worst part of the experience. So there may or may not have been a mistake - that's not speaking out of one's ass. How rude. How RUDE.
I would hope your next chapter will have a girl in it as I like double penetration with twin brothers 😀