All Comments on 'Seeing Double Ch. 03'

I read the first chapter solely out of curiosity, and thought it was alright. The series has an awkwardness that reflects the situation well. I think just about any of us would be thoroughly confused by something like this. But however realistic, it makes for a slighty whiny and annoying story.

Please write another chapter or two!!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE !!! WRITE MORE !!

Plz update this!! I read this a long time ago and it's still not updated.... Really?

... grammar, punctuation and unacceptable mixture of Past and Present Tense is absolutely appalling!!

In case you do not know what that word means, it means that this is the worst alleged 'story' it has ever been my misfortune to read!!

Anyone who misguidedly 'Favorited' this misbegotten drivel must be totally illiterate!

1* because that is the lowest rating that will be recorded.

I WOULD LIKE TO ENCOURGE YOU TO KEEP TRYING: Grammar Nazis be ignored you did a great job I suffer many reading and writing disorders but I keep trying please don't stop thank you for sharing !!!!!

All over again. I wonder... It's there any other way to deal with things? Lying, being unreasonable, shouting, running away... yep, perfectly advertorial adult behaviour.

Awesome story dude pls add more chapters 🙂