All Comments on 'Seeing Her Again'

by Yoshimatsu

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DonnaBeckDonnaBeckover 9 years ago
Stunning

What a lovely romantic and very sexy story. Well written with a distinct voice. Beautifully done. I hope you write many more! 5 stars and a smile.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
WOW!!!!

WOW, just WOW!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I am impressed

Very, very interesting xx

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombover 9 years ago
A great study in tension and intensity!

The slow build of this story provides such rich believability to the narrator's life and circle of friends that the sex is ten times as hot, because I could completely feel the years of yearning that led up to this encounter. Pacing is almost always one of the factors that set a Literotica story above the competition, but I'm not sure I've read anything on the site where the pacing so fundamentally conveyed the point of the narrative. Very nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Hot and romantic

Beautiful story and sexy as hell. Felt like a movie. I could see it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I was hooked when I read that..

..."Kirsty was a real firebrand, fun to the point of trouble."

Excellent read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Why would you call this a romance author

romance is a situation, but a romance "story" is about love not lust. lust DOES NOT!!! = love. This story reminds me more of ZERO love wife swapping for more fun...there is no real love here...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Needs an Ending!

So,what is the ultimate outcome?

Does he leave the army for her?

Does this encounter fulfill their attraction and they move on separately?

A really edgy build-up to their years-long mutual attraction but, a real void results at the end.

I rated this a 4 although it would have been a 5 with an ending.

Funlovingflirt1Funlovingflirt1almost 6 years ago
Simply amazing!

I’m so happy I got around to reading this. Your work is just amazing. You’re so descriptive in every situation, every action, every thought. I love the back and forth with the characters, the raw emotion that he constantly battled and the sex... omg! I absolutely loved the way he found himself debating whether to unleashing his sexual wrath upon her or fuck her like a lady and how he went from being all about pleasing her to being selfish after a while. Man, I think if I was kristy, I’d want you to release all your sexual tension, pent up emotions and supressed feeling on me or should I say in me? Lol have a great day babe

** To Anonymous who commented on 2/17 bitching about romance, go fuck yourself!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lots of virtue signaling to get through at the beginning but a good story

Aussie1951Aussie19518 months ago
Not a bad story

But you put this story in the wrong category, it certainly wasn’t a romance story that for sure. Lust is not love… You left the story up to our imagination with your ending which really pissed me off. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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I came on here a few years ago, interested in erotic stories, made some friends who encouraged me to write... and the next thing I'm posting stories myself. If anyone wishes to comment on my writing - absolutely thank you for the feedback either way (so long as you have read ...

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