by O2
Your first two submissions are absolutely delicious! I look forward to reading more of your work. Your stories are almost as enjoyable as talking to you personally.*kiss*
Renee'
aka grllvr
That was an extremely well written and very erotic story. This is your second story and your second success. Two for two, not a bad average.
I pictured myself there just taking in her juices and wanting more of her. keep it cumming. thanks
Very well done! I enjoyed the build up...much better than getting right down to the good bits.
Such a lovely, well-paced and descriptive story. As some one else commented, the buildup is just as important as the reward. On to your other submissions, in due time. I don't want to overdose on them. *winks*
Niara
Great start! Hopefully, this is the start to a series, instead of, merely, a sequel! It goes without saying that Lindsey, definitely, needs to get more involved! Thanks, and keep writing. We'll definitely keep reading!