All Comments on 'Selling the Car'

by randallangdon

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rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
wrong category

nothing erotic about that coupling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Rightbank is a dick

I loved it!

tazz317tazz317almost 7 years ago
THE ART OF THE DEAL

or how to lose your mate, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I can see why she's getting divorced

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a great story I am grateful..

I like the way Shannon went from rushing to class to a classroom to undressing in her living room to sell her Sebring and began to reawaken herself as a woman.

Paul is clearly attracted to her nd based on the description Shannon is very cute.

Overall it is a fun story. with positive outcomes:

1. The Sebring got a new home;

2. Paul and Shannon went from car buyer and car seller to fuck buddies;

3. Shannon got the money for the divorce;

4. Shannon only has to show Todd the money per the agreement, $6600, so $900 is her secret stash and every woman needs a secret cash stash; and

Shannon and Paul have the opportunity to move to the next step, friends with benefits and maybe more.

I am now going to gradually read and enjpy your other stories

PS: I do a lot of writing for my work and I know how many drafts this story probably went through until it was uploaded on the site, error-free. Thanks to you and your proofreaders, editors etc. ! am grateful.

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