All Comments on 'Serendipity'

This would have to be the best story I have read in my life. I loved it. Now I'm just wondering how I can get my hubby to suggest something like that to me.

Just hot thank you for writing it.

Some people can't write, so they criticize negatively. Eric belongs in that breed. He can't even spell "excruciatingly" right!

Critics, who don't appreciate descriptive narratives are usually the ones who are "wham-bam, thank you m'am" and roll over after getting their jollies.

Serendipity... keep on writing.

Thanx, a great story, hot and steamy, just the right Literotica temperature for me!

I so want to be the wife in your story. I'm dripping now just thinking about it. I'm now off to the bedroom to play out this story in my mind.

Like your wife said, "Uou opened that Pandora's Box. She's loving it...expect more. With, or without, your consent.Maybe you better have future Jose's wear a condom.

Good and sexy story.