by Rattlesnake1775
I like your writing style, the detail and the erotic sex...you have everything a good erotic story needs, including some surprises!
I love this story. My boyfriend is in the army and is comming home soon, this hit home.. I loved every second of the story, keep up the good work..
Great story, but please study up on homonyms and employ an editor. Misspelling and poor English detract from a truly great read.