All Comments on 'Sex Addict'

A fun tale with a good mix of a variety of themes!

Keep up the good work!

THAT WAS SIMPLY INCREDIBLY HOTTT

Please more on this story. You're an excellent writer. I've enjoyed all your stories.

Seeing how intricate your other stories are I would love to see where this can go!!!

Ya know, I never really thought about what a SA meeting would be like. It wouldn't be like AA, would it? You could have all these people getting off on each others stories,like a mass enablement.

..., but I stopped with the first sex-scene. Let me explain: its not the writing itself, the descriptions of the act and whatnot, thats all nice and fine, I just got the impression that you did not make up your mind about what type of story you are writing here. You start off as first-person narrator, that tells a group of people about his experiences, but as he tells the story, suddenly he turns into the all-knowing narrator. If you started like that, it would make sense to inlcude stuff like he "took a deep breath and let out the anger and stress". If you tell about what happened to yourself you would not go to that lenght. Its different if a third person narrator explains it. Also, did he not just try to explain his first time falling for his step-daughter? How it all started? Does it make sense that he immediately fucks her when he lays his eyes on her with her mother present? As I said: building blocks are all there, but what you need is a coherent approach.

Mate u r a natural at this, Only one or two slight misspells but nothing two annoying. Keep up the good job mate.

It was a very HOT story and a great story but it could have been better and greater if you would have give the ages of the young girls.

I agree with Lagonda from (5) years ago...so you get a four(4)Star score for this. As I said on another story...run-on sentences, bad punctuation...

I DID finish this story...barely...🥴😢