by Peterspeter
I could just picture myself being one of those girls ;)
The author did a good job of making Karen different from Margery, and thus the experiences were also different. Margery was considerate of his first time and more gentle (obviously better for a first-time guy). Karen was more demanding and aggressive, even to the point of pain, although not in the deliberate way of S/M or some degrading cuckold stories. In her passion, and in keeping with her agressive nature, she made a mistake and apologized for it. Thus the author shows two differing personalities. To each his own but I preferred Margery. Both alike in that they loved sex and were forward about it. So, very good storytelling.
Also a hint of realism in this fantasy, as not all of all experiences can be pleasant all the time.
Can the author maintain this variety and high quality writing through the coming 17 chapters? If so, this will be one of the few truly great Literotica series.
Paul in Oklahoma