by Peterspeter
So often in erotic stories the characters are just cardboard cut-outs, only there as transport for a set of genitals. No so in this case. This story is populated by real people doing realistic things, and expressing real concerns about their young lives.... as well as having a lot of great sex! I especially liked the chapter where Carl had a erectile crisis, that rang very true, that episode made him into a real young man, not just a fucking machine for our voyeuristic entertainment.
Well thought out, well constructed and well written. For me you have struck just the right balance of storyline and sex. Very well done indeed.
Tom D