by L.A. Wicker
but this was really disjointed and confusing. Really, really horrible.
HoneyJaye
Wasn't all that good...no tension, like reading a story about a boyfriend/girlfriend not bro/sis, you could do much better
Awesome story! Great story line. 5 stars :) However a million dollars is 1,000,000 and one hundred grand is 100,000. Being math minded irritated me in those bits but still great! If your gunna do something like that again say somethin like a mill. I don't like to point our flaws but I sorta have OCD so... yeah... Thanks for reading this if you do!
This story was awesome, but you need to continue it! They don't have to be on Sex Tv, but please continue their story and possibly add Tabitha into their sex scenes! :D
I still enjoyed the hell out of it! Five Stars!