All Comments on 'Sexual Awakening Ch. 01-05'

Some years ago I read a list of the worst cliches in erotic writing - the author of this piece must have read it, too - omitted very few

The whole story line - a raped virgin has an orgasm the first time she has sex, and thereafter becomes insatiable - is one of the most overused cliches by itself. Not much of a story - no plot, no character development (other than the straight laced virgin aforesaid becomes a nymphomaniac)

please continue, almost cum

wheres the next part??