All Comments on 'Sexy Swimming'

I stopped reading where she said she had double G boobs.

And yet, the person ahead of me went to the end to make their snarky comment. I can't say I was super-turned on by this story, but it is really, really, really well-written. I actually enjoyed just reading it as a story, which is 99.9% not the case at literotica.

Has a story & fun sex with a real size woman. Write more.

brilliant story this was so very nice to read to start then it only got better,

with the end part putting the icing on the cake so to speak. it turn out an awesome story do hope there more to come thank you a pleasure to read.

It feels very heartfelt and honest. I hope it's at least partly true.

I loved this story from the start. It's great when you read a story and can tell the words came from writer's heart and sould. Keep up the great work!

You have a lovely writing style. Although I couldn't relate to the character (I'm slender and very turned off by the line 'I love to eat'), I loved the emotion and the realism of this fantasy. Good luck in the contest!

Thank you all so much for your lovely comments - erotica fans are so nice! :)

I will definitely write more and maybe try and have some saucy escapades to inspire me!

Kinkster

I like BBW stories you should add that tag also I love all the build up but a little taste before the end wouldn’t go a miss.

That being said great read. Fleshed out characters and brilliant story teased me till the end and kept me reading.

BRAVO!!!

story ok but awful grammer & writing style