by kailab
great plot & character build ups. hope next chapter comes quickly!
This chapter is much easier to read than the first. Keep up the good work.
I like this story alot. This feels more like a scene in a movie though. The chapters need to be longer and encompass more than one small scene because it feels like the story didn't do more than edge forward as the Lyken did. Other than that, I love the unique characters and the situation you put the prince in and look forward to the story.
he can be really stupid and really smart at the same time and an idiot all over!!!!!