by Sir_Nathan
Absolutely adored this story. This woman is living my fantasy. I would love to see this story continued. Now, to go fantasize...
This is an excellent story. I really enjoyed reading your story. I just wanted to thank you. You gave me some good ideas.
really loved ur work.wow. i kinda think its every dirty girls desire to be used and this was just too much,the story i mean. has to be one of the best written stories around so far.
Please note this is a story of 'reluctance' which will include 'non-consensual' aspects later in the story. As this is the ~ Non-consent/'RELUCTANCE' - Fantasies of control ~ category, it is in the correct place.
Apologies for not putting this note at the beginning of the story. Also, this comment replaces the one that appeared at the end of the following chapter.
A tense, highly erotic dynamic is in play, and I look forward to the culmination!
(Ah, the secret shameful fantasy and the excruciating ambivalence of revealing and fulfilling it--one of my pet themes.)
i am sooo glad You're going to write the next chapter Sir! This one was so hot!
panting in anticipation...
emerald
OK, I'll admit to a bit of surprise at just how well written this first chapter is. The characters are engaging, the conversation natural yet evocative, and the emotions conveyed are dead-on accurate. The jumble of contradictory emotions is especailly well-stated. It would be a shame if there were no more chapters.