All Comments on 'Shadow School Ch. 02'
by RedHotLadybug
- 7 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis got be all worked up- something tells me you have something dark on the horizon
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis one was kinda light but I see where your going with the whole blood ecstasy thing so I'm hoping the rest of your story is as good as the build you got goin- write faster!
WinkWink19over 13 years agoperfect combination of eroticism and story building. keep it up!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI like but there seems to be a lot of sex scenes not that i'm complaining but there is no dramatic buildup and i find myself just skipping over them, like mel masterbating in the bathroom... it went from her feeling hot and bothered from being bit to directly her masterbating. Some build up might be good in future stories.
However i do like the plot thus far and am intrigued by this college idea and whats going to happen
Anonymousover 12 years agobathroom scene was unexpectedly erotic! it wouldnt have worked otherwise getting your point across with her out of control fire. i didnt skip a word.
X6rose6red6Xalmost 12 years agothat bathroom scene was very hot.
and this college sounds like my kind of place, I'm a sucker for that old victorian/elizabethian style anything.especially architecture. i wish all colleges were like this!
