by Stringar
Really enjoyed your way of telling the story. I wonder if it might not be from a true experience. Very Good.
I'm really torn. This is a wonderful story for the mature section, yet it's also a great Romance story as well. I'm putting this one in my favorite story file for many delightful rereadings!
Thanks ever so much!
Kydreamer
And yes, parts of the tale definitely had a ring of authenticity. I could just see a manly man reading a romance to find out what makes his lady-love tick. Touching!
I have to agree with the comments previous, this truly was both a romance story, as well as a very passionate sensual one. The sexuality was perfectly molded into a story of this type. The discovery of his ladies passions, desires...the fact he took the time to discover what it was she liked...(more importantly who she was) was well developed. Again..amorous to be sure, sultry and sexy yes...but perfectly done with just the right mix of spices and naughtyness to make it exciting as hell to read!
Thank you!
and hot!
You did an excellent job of defining the characters and how they were drawn to each other.
And a very nice job describing the settings that the action took place in.
Well done.
the details of the story were exquisite, with good background and sufficient eroticism to balance the story out. Thanks for giving Lit. this truly wonderful tale!