All Comments on 'Shapeshifter Ch. 03'

wow die geschichte ist echt super! hab gerade alle drei kapitel gelesen und bin jetzt in kel und noom total verknallt. der sex war von anfang an geil, wie noom erst mal panik und gleich danach trost in kel reinfickte, und die sexuelle spannung zwischen den beiden wird immer greifbarer. die handlung wird auch spannender! kann auf die nächste fortseztungsfolge kaum warten - aber lass dir zeit und genieß das schreiben :)

There is something really compelling about this story. In a way it's very brutal and dark but alonside that there is something quite fragile and real developing. I love the character of Kel and you can believe why Noom would become captivated by his unusual vulnerability and strange innocence. Kel needs someone to be on his side and he needs love. Despite the violence at the beginning I really hope Noom becomes the saviour and rock he deserves. Honestly can't wait for the next chapter.

Well, you answered many of the questions I wrote in the comments and it helped alot. I like how this is going. I just felt at the end like he was becoming a little too soft with him too quickly. I was surprised by that sentiment. I just feel like if Kel feels like Noom isn't 'in charge' anymore, it could lead to a stupid move on his part. Clearly that dominance on Noom's part turns Kel on to a certain extent anyhow. I also think he needs love and I don't like that he's never been cared for, but I think Noom should keep up the pretense for a bit. Afterall, he seemed from the beginning to identify little signs that Noom wasn't a depraved killer and that he may not be even as violent as he came across. Now that he's helping Kel,

Overall, I agree with a comment that said it was captivating. I really am enjoying the story and want more soon! :)

I just read all three chapters, and I really really REALLY hope we don't have to wait another eight months for the next one. I so want to know what happens!! The characters are fascinating and compelling.

Oh gee, I shall hope so too ;) If I don't get sidetracked by other ideas again, I'll probably be faster with the next part.

I just found this story & I absolutely love it!

You have to finish this xD

Or I will take out my frustration on my keyboard.

More please!!!

I want to see Kel shift. I would also like to see Noom learn about his attraction/empathic link to the shapeshifter!!

I love it so far!!

Any idea on when you'll have the next chapter to this story? I really like this one, I can't help but stalk your blog hoping the next chapter will appear there oneday:)

Very gritty too - thanks for the warnings on the violence. You do get caught up in it - and then are left having to read the violence too ! Excellent work with the English - well done with the sentence structure. And when a word is a bit off I still know exactly (I think) what you meant