by SharonMWF
Fucking good story Sharon, you obviously love your cock, the bigger the better! Can't wait for the next part. xx
I know you have this listed as a four part series, but could you find it in your erotic heart to please continue this storyline some more ! Please, pretty please! I love to beg a beautiful woman for something this hot! Thank you.
Great story line, believably erotic. I personally identify with the characters up to the point of the actors entrance and would much enjoy fulfilling the rest. Still no go with the wife though but she did enjoy the story. Thanks for sharing.
Antinony
I liked the concept and your description of the sex scenes, but there are a few problems in it, too. You repeat a lot of stuff in the first third of the story, to the point were I wondered if I had accidentily scrolled up without noticing.
Also, as a little nitpick: The question marks come after direct speech. "Don't you think?" Instead of "Don't you think" she asked?
Really great backstory and writing! I'll definitely read more from you!
Nicholas Alexander
They are so much fun and it's great with your husband there, it adds so much to the hot times. We are looking forward to reading more.
What a shame Porn shoots are hard work, real hard work sometimes having to reshoot scenes over and over again. Ask any Porn actor they’ll tell you it is no dream job
I love that you describe not only the physical action, but your emotions as well. You obviously love sex, Sharon. Having seen your body, I can easily imagine it, too. Looking forward to the rest of this series.
So, numbnuts is your husband? Sorry name for one who is in love with all you do? ;)