All Comments on 'Sharon Models for Porn Shoot'

by SharonMWF

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R_PetersonR_Petersonover 12 years ago
Very nicely written...

and very erotic. A story me and for the wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

Fucking good story Sharon, you obviously love your cock, the bigger the better! Can't wait for the next part. xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very nice stroke story

Thank you

GizmorGizmorover 12 years ago
Sharon

Enjoyed this very much. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another Hot Chapter!

I know you have this listed as a four part series, but could you find it in your erotic heart to please continue this storyline some more ! Please, pretty please! I love to beg a beautiful woman for something this hot! Thank you.

AntinonyAntinonyover 12 years ago
well written sexiness

Great story line, believably erotic. I personally identify with the characters up to the point of the actors entrance and would much enjoy fulfilling the rest. Still no go with the wife though but she did enjoy the story. Thanks for sharing.

Antinony

AmberLynn3AmberLynn3over 12 years ago
Awesome!

Thanks for a hot story. Loved it!

Liz_57Liz_57about 12 years ago
Great Story

I really like the story, it is very sexy.

sexylovergirlsexylovergirlabout 12 years ago
Awesome

Loved this series, made me hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Idea good, but some problems

I liked the concept and your description of the sex scenes, but there are a few problems in it, too. You repeat a lot of stuff in the first third of the story, to the point were I wondered if I had accidentily scrolled up without noticing.

Also, as a little nitpick: The question marks come after direct speech. "Don't you think?" Instead of "Don't you think" she asked?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Really great backstory and writing! I'll definitely read more from you!

Nicholas Alexander

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Porn Shoots

They are so much fun and it's great with your husband there, it adds so much to the hot times. We are looking forward to reading more.

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

What a shame Porn shoots are hard work, real hard work sometimes having to reshoot scenes over and over again. Ask any Porn actor they’ll tell you it is no dream job

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The word you keep misspelling is "discreet."

OldnotDead71OldnotDead71about 3 years ago
Great descriptions!

I love that you describe not only the physical action, but your emotions as well. You obviously love sex, Sharon. Having seen your body, I can easily imagine it, too. Looking forward to the rest of this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So, numbnuts is your husband? Sorry name for one who is in love with all you do? ;)

Anonymous
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