by Naked1
that was awesome, started a bit slow and he was starting to piss me off with all the thinking but it got really really good in the end.
"Fuck me dad" Finally after 3 chapters of build up, Shawna utters the magic words. Nice fuck scene in the kitchen. Now that he's fucked her, what next? Please keep going.
The chapters are a little short, but I guess the wait isn't unbearable! I enjoy these characters a lot. I hate the stories where they fall into bed with no thought. I like that the Dad has a conscience. I'm interested in seeing the drama play out between dads guilt, Shawnas desire and the daughters anger, sadness, or is she in on it? Looking forward to it!
What a hot sex scene with his second daughter, I do hope that Shawna goes back for more as her second dad seems to love her much more than a daughter now.
Are you going to write any more chapters for this story?
Sorry for the delay. There will be another chapter of Shawna.
Naked1
Read all your stories back to back and now I want more stories what's going to happen next
I read all three chapters in succession, and holy shit what a great build up to the orgasmic climax. That, oh, Naked1 has earned you a big, fat five (5) on the richter scale. Outfuckingstanding, Yeah!
This is a great series -- all three chapters have built up to a wonderful story and two loving daughters. I hope you will write many more chapters! Thanks so much!
I read this storie a shit ton of times a d I've cummed every time thinking of my daughter and her best friend
I just your story about Angel and stroked myself silly...then I found this one and stroked off again. Fuck man. Who are you? You embody every middle aged man's fantasy.