All Comments on 'Shawna My Daughter’s Friend Ch. 03'

by Naked1

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bigscotty69bigscotty69almost 11 years ago
fukn mad

that was awesome, started a bit slow and he was starting to piss me off with all the thinking but it got really really good in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot!

"Fuck me dad" Finally after 3 chapters of build up, Shawna utters the magic words. Nice fuck scene in the kitchen. Now that he's fucked her, what next? Please keep going.

leann5redleann5redalmost 11 years ago
good story keep it up

looking forwourd to next chapter leannx

MaximguyMaximguyalmost 11 years ago
Yes!

The chapters are a little short, but I guess the wait isn't unbearable! I enjoy these characters a lot. I hate the stories where they fall into bed with no thought. I like that the Dad has a conscience. I'm interested in seeing the drama play out between dads guilt, Shawnas desire and the daughters anger, sadness, or is she in on it? Looking forward to it!

Miss_JenniMiss_Jennialmost 11 years ago
hot sex

What a hot sex scene with his second daughter, I do hope that Shawna goes back for more as her second dad seems to love her much more than a daughter now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Where is chapter 4?

Are you going to write any more chapters for this story?

Naked1Naked1almost 11 years agoAuthor
Yes there will be another chapter

Sorry for the delay. There will be another chapter of Shawna.

Naked1

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
want more

Read all your stories back to back and now I want more stories what's going to happen next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
naked1twothumbsup

love this story keep it going......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
That was so fucking great!

I read all three chapters in succession, and holy shit what a great build up to the orgasmic climax. That, oh, Naked1 has earned you a big, fat five (5) on the richter scale. Outfuckingstanding, Yeah!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent !!!!!!!11

This is a great series -- all three chapters have built up to a wonderful story and two loving daughters. I hope you will write many more chapters! Thanks so much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I cumed

I read this storie a shit ton of times a d I've cummed every time thinking of my daughter and her best friend

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
DAMN

I just your story about Angel and stroked myself silly...then I found this one and stroked off again. Fuck man. Who are you? You embody every middle aged man's fantasy.

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