by sweetscented
brilliant first story. love the reading of it. you wrote this so well.
reading on was like watch as he first suck thoes momster tits, swallowing down the sweet milk from them. bring her to one gigantic orgasm.
What a beautiful, erotic and literate story - a wonderful introduction to your writing. I hope we will see much more of it in the future - thank you and welcome!
Thanks for the feedback, I really welcome it.
Sweetscented.
There are few things better than sucking the milk from engorged breasts with large protruding nipples, when a woman is allowing herself to be sexually stimulated by the experience because her hormones are raging during lactation following childbirth.
What a wonderful rendering of that experience!
I enjoyed writing this, so I thank you for the comment.
Very erotic, and very well written. I'd love to see you include some dialogue in a story like this, so that we could hear the voices of the characters.
thanks for your comment. Regarding dialogue, the omission was deliberate. I felt this should be a man's recollection of an intense erotic encounter and that dialogue would interfere with its flow, as it is more about feelings and actions than words exchanged. However I am interested in the idea of writing a story based purely on dialogue, when time permits.
This is a fetish of mine, nursing a lactating woman. A good read, thanks.
simply wonderful. I didn't realize it until I read your story that this is a fantasy that fills me, makes my heart beat faster to think of it, to dream it. It makes me feel better that there is a woman out there who shares it. Thank you.