All Comments on 'She Begins Naive, She Ends Euphoric'

by ArthurG77

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ArthurG77ArthurG77over 11 years agoAuthor
apathy

I must say I am rather disappointed with the lack of feedback and relatively low number of readers for this story :-( I considered this to be my best yet. I guess the title wasn't as appealing as the previous 2 in the series (My friend's 43y/o kinky Mother). Also the fact that it is the 3rd part in a series that is under a different category than the previous 2 probably put people off. I suspect most readers turned away after the first 2 paragraphs. Also spelling pyjamas incorrectly probably didn't help either. For those of you that did actually take the time to read the whole of this wonderful story. Thank you very much. Please rate and comment.

NewWaveDaveNewWaveDaveover 11 years ago
Excellent!

I have read all 3 of your stories so far. They are all oozing with sexyness. They all got me well hard. But I must say dude, this one is your masterpiece. One of the hottest and well told stories I have ever read. 5 stars.

aclwolfaclwolfabout 11 years ago
Good Work

I must say that this is the best story of the 3 stories. Great job keep it up

Mag58Mag58over 9 years ago
Excellent

Wow.....you should write a lot more; very sexy details ;)

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