by bbonz1
So excited to see chapter two!! Love the way this is heading, only wish it was longer!!!
Out standing. The slut is in a state of apprehension as well as antisipation....Ready for more...yet fearfull...
Great continuance to a hot story. She is a state of confusion and anticpation as well as fear of the unknown scared but wanting. I would feel the same way in her position. I can even put myself in her position as I read the story. I could be her.
I found the promised 'explicit detail' very much to my liking and I am looking forward to reading more of this excellent and very hot tale. 5 *s and, again, my thanks.
Wonderful. I'm loving it so far. You're a very talented author & I (among others I'm sure) very much appreciate your work. Keep it up!