All Comments on 'She Had Fangs'

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broadway65broadway65about 12 years ago

really good i hope there is a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Well done

Very well done. I'd love to see part 2.

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
Great

either as a stand alone story or one you could definitely add to!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

PLEASE LET THERE BE A PART 2!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
nice

not usually my kind of story, but this one was really well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Excellent

faq52faq52about 12 years ago
your sentence structure is terrible.

and you cannot spell.

James G 5James G 5about 12 years ago
Good but needs editing

Decent premise & start, your continuity and structure were OK, but you need help to proof your spelling & grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I hate that ppl find the need to be little others.

It was an awesome story. Keep it uo

jonmartin22jonmartin22almost 12 years ago
ace!

great story, I very much enjoyed it.

crazycujocrazycujoalmost 12 years ago
wow

hey...you can't stop now.....more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Goddamnit.

I need more. You did some decent things with this vampire shit, Though it could've been longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Keep it up

Nice story but keep it up for more capthers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantastic!

I really liked it

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