All Comments on 'She Is New To the City'

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ag2507ag2507over 9 years ago
I seriously hope there is more to come...

See above

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
what a simple but sexy story

to borrow from the text,

elegant.

thank you

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
i think you may be geographically confused

"a French grape called Gewürztraminer . . . "

do you not think it might be German with a name like that?

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueover 9 years ago
Good story

I thought the storyline and pacing 'elegantly' done.

BTW rightbank, Gewurztraminer is a grape variety grown all over the world from Australia to Canada, Chile to Washington State and all over Europe. The Gewurztraminer made in the French Alsace region is considered the best quality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wonderful

Loved the pacing and seduction. Elegant indeed. Liked that he came to appreciate her as a person. Good sexy story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great read

Beautiful story....I fell in love with her also...although you didn't mention if she had a ring....bothers me,a little....she seemed to move a little fast for someone e engaged....but she made me feel the seduction. Beautifully written loved the character development. Also hot as he'll! Keep writing...try some longer stories....thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Next chapter, please!

Would love to see more of this couple. Next chapter, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Perfect seduction

Loved the seduction and how he drew her out of her shell. Great story. I too would like a follow up chapter.

PixiehoffPixiehoffalmost 5 years ago
Such a sexy read

This was such a sexy read, even for a lesbian. Well-paced and with a good pace and character delineation.

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