All Comments on 'She Reminds Me Ch. 01'

I'm very much looking forward to more!!

Very good. I enjoyed every moment. Keep em' coming:)

That was a surprise! A totally different storyline, excellently told with all the right elements. Well edited too thank you. Really looking forward to the next chapter!

What a way to start, wow!

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope. Also, unlike many, or most actually, on Lit you take your time and show patience with introducing the sexual situations until you have created the appropriate mood and situation, that’s beautiful.

I’ve published a couple of pieces on Lit and would really appreciate you reading them and giving me the benefit of your experience, if that isn’t too much of a liberty, I hope not as I don’t want to appear to be rude. More importantly, though, is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James

love the build up of characters, and the story line is interesting.

Writing is very good, and you draw the reader in. Excellent

I like your story very much. You have strong characters and sex scenes are absolutely HOT.