All Comments on 'She Takes What She Wants'

Was looking forward for some more chapters, but either way I thoroughly enjoyed it

I have so many things to say about these stories. First, they are far more than just fuck stories, although they are loaded with kinky stuff. Second, we see fairly deep into the soul and thoughts of Eric. We see how he's torn between his cautious nature and his more adventurous, kinky side. Lastly, how many times have we heard stories about submissive males trying to turn a reluctant, vanilla woman into the domme of his dreams? Well, this is the opposite- a truly dominant woman breaking down the vanilla walls of a sub-curious male. While probably not unique on Literotica, it is a pleasant rarity. Excellent job!!!

Grow a set, turn around and walk away from the crazy bitch. Problem solved.

But at the end of the day, he knew what he wanted. No way in hell he follows her. He leaves her because he's found his pride and self respect and there is no going back to being demeaned and humiliated by the bitch.

Please write more stories of Eric and Miss Julia

Walk away from her or send her to jail.

DO A SEQUEL

you finished this story series of abuse and the stupidity of a man obsessed. In my ending he really does walk away and leave the nutcase for good.

Since we're talking about how "we" would have ended your series, my own ending would have included some form of physical overpowerment or intimidation of Eric by Julia, beyond the refusal to accept his "quitting" her. But I do love what you did with it. Bravo, she's exciting, mysterious, sexy and tough.

Not the end i would have preferred...

Its not the worst but there are many better variants.

He never asked her for kind of training to stand punishments to her satisfaction.

She could be more demanding and controlling him

No doubt he's hers but he could make more effort in pleasing her and satisfying her needs

He should be much more polite and thankful