All Comments on 'She was Number 3 on List'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
You had the start of something pretty spectacular

here and then you just stopped...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More mental than physical

Even though there was little in the way of action, you could just feel the tension and expectation in the air.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
What?

I'm sorry, but this story started off very well but completly board me towards the end. Wish there would have been...more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
interesting beginning...

i loved the beginning of this, but it doesn't feel finished. What happens to her next? I'd love to know more.

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