by Jaisen
I like your story pacing. Your character development is excellent. We care about these people. The balance of supernatural elements with real world knowledge/abilities is good. The low tech things like chili powder, bells and cans are a good touch. Look forward to more.
I don't understand why the comments page for this story isn't overflowing. This is a wonderfully entertaining piece with mystery, supportive family and friends, sneaky bastard bad guys, cute kids, sneaky bastard bad guys, chocolate cake, sneaky bastard bad guys, hot furry guys who are allergic to chocolate cake, sneaky bastard bad guys and a sexy earth momma heroine who is more than she appears to be. What more could we want?
Read and give love people!
I'M TRULY ENJOYING THIS NEW STORY OF YOURS. I'M SO LOVING YOUR CHARACTERS THAT I FEEL LIKE I'M RIGHT THERE WITH THEM ACTUALLY PARTICIPATING IN THE STORY SCENES AS YOU DESCRIBE THEM ALONG WITH ALL THE EMOTIONS. GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!
I am really enjoying this story. I started reading 'Buster' first, then caught up by reading your other nonhuman stories. I absolutely love your shifter universe! Please keep writing; more chapters for 'Sheeple' and more stories about all the awesome characters you have developed.