All Comments on 'Sheila's Training Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot start

What a hot start to a story. Nice characterization and grassy dialogue.

BluegrayBluegrayabout 12 years ago
Fun story

What an enjoyable read. You tell it well and make the characters feel very real.

Thanks

PacoFearPacoFearover 13 years ago
Double-thumbs up!

I picked you up when you earned your green 'E' for "Emily, Disaffected" (congrats on it!) then wandered here next. I'm really enjoying your clever, snarky, literate style. Your stuff reads both smart _and_ dirty, my absolute favorite. I'll be tacking you onto my favorites list in about ten seconds.

Cheers,

-PF

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I hope you finish this one

It's a promising, rather erotic start..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Anal Sex is Tops, in our view!

A most thoughtful entrance into the dark world of Anal pleasure, taking her readers where the sun never shines, as a rule. Your fans look forward to further BDSM/Anal type adventures, as a trainee experiences masochistic pleasure beyond her expectations, leading to gay sex with queer boyfriends and 'vanilla' lovers alike?

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