by SwitchMami
The visual I got while reading it was amazing. I hope you write more.
But neglected to comment. Enjoyed your first. Eagerly awaiting your next submissions. Keep writing
Mmm to catch a girl in such a predicament would be a treat although I'd watch her finish first then finish her off... Your version is delicious as well.
Everybody's comments are amazing! Just wanted to say a big "thank you" and let my little fan club know that I'm currently trying to flesh out a couple of new stories, one being a potential collaborative effort with a dear friend, and another with my first-draft editor. Much love to all, and ALL feedback is appreciated!
A lovely erotic adventure. The home office thing was a great twist............ You need to write more ;) Well done!
I loved it! You must keep writing.....you need too. You have a skill for getting to the point & making such an arousing story. Did I mention I loved it?
oh - - very hot. I liked it very much. I wish I could get caught watching videos like that!
Well done Darling girl, The way you managed to fit all that action in a short story like that is incredible. Don't stop that imagination. Let it flow like fresh juices... xoxo
It's surprising where the mind will go, but I'm glad yours went there...great short & naughty little story...very arousing...