All Comments on 'Shella'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very Interesting

One small point. If it is to be a series of stories around a central theme then maybe you need a title for the theme + one for each episode

e.g. FantasyWorld - Shella

Otherwise the readers won't know the stories are part of a set

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What a cool story!...

Fucking a mermaid has always been my favorite fantasy, and Shella fits my picture of what a REAL mermaid is EXACTLY! WOW! She may not have a tail, but she can eat underwater and stay down as long as wants to, which is my definition of a mermaid (besides, if she had a tail up to her waist, how could she have a pussy?). I wish I could breathe underwater.

Thanks for the story and keep up the good work, looking forward to more chapters...

GigglingGoblinGigglingGoblinover 7 years ago
You really must write more.

You have introduced a fascinating, fresh, and wonderfully bizarre world here. I haven't seen anything else like it. I really hope you keep writing on this site. I want to read more.

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