by KarennaC
BROKEN RECORD REPEATING EVERYTHING FUCKING THING ON EVERY CHAPTER IT IS BORING READING THE SAME SHIT TIME AFTER TIME
The more I read, the more I dislike Shane. I know it takes two to tango, but my god!!! He doesn't hear a word Declan is saying and if Declan can't stand up for himself and gives in to what Shane wants, he deserves what he gets.
dinkyboots - it is fine to critique someone's work it is rude to criticize their work - you don't like it don't read it - but you read each chapter and harp on about how bad it is - after the first chapter why did you read any more.
I like the story - not so much the recap at the start of each chapter - but I didn't write it. The author wants to do it this way so be it.
Karenna - keep writing ignore the ass!
agin with the boring sex.? tell me , are you a virgin by any chance talk about tame.?
You know, these chapters aren't more than a page long, and there aren't that many of them. You really don't need to spent the first 1/4 of each recapping.