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Click here"Cum on my face," I whispered softly, my wish granted in seconds by a hot, thick, creamy load generously raining down where my hungry eyes waited to feel it splash across my grateful smile.
"My God, that was fucking amazing," Joel said, gazing down at me.
"Mmmmm, it sure was," I said, slurping up the mess, while thinking to myself what a great story we had for Dr. Sinclair the next week. "So you're not mad?" I asked, hoping he wasn't angry with me for changing plans.
"Not at all," he said. "In fact, we should do this again sometime," he suggested, surprising me with a statement that promptly inspired lustful thoughts of the young, slender, tattooed college student, soon to be moving in with his lovely mother, in the newly renovated, second floor apartment, finally ready for our first tenants.
"Yes, we do," I told my husband. "And I think I know just the right person we need..."
The End
Continued in Part 4: Rite of Passage
Coming soon...
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To show that side of her is cool except taking her to a pimp is a little pathetic--finishing with the young guy was cool--it as also sad making a little racist out of it--outside that small detail it was a well written story
In hindsight, maybe this chapter didn't work. All I can do is learn from it. For those who did enjoy it, thank you for the support.
I don't need it to be incest, I just need it to be interesting. Bad storyline and bad dialogue just killed it. How can I be voting 5* for chapter 1 and 1* for this?
Are you sure this submission is in the correct genre? Sorry I didn't feel like voting. I just think I may have lost interest. Suggestion: Rewrite and resubmit; then you have me back. The series started out great but to remain great and have good readership interest, the continuity has to be considered important as well.