All Comments on 'She's Gonna Be A Star Ch. 02'

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KnickersKnickersabout 20 years ago
Very entertaining!

Excellent, well written series for exhibition fans. Ali (or 'Perky' as I like to think of her) is a great character. Particularly enjoyed her new attitude to working at the diner! Look forward to reading further instalments.

blackgblackgabout 9 years ago
A certified classic

I can't believe these 'Ali Katz' stories have not generated more comments.

I guess most people really do like the dumbed down easy sex story.

But I will always come back to my favorite girl. Ali!

gkrishnagkrishnaover 8 years ago
Too much too soon

Loved the first chapter, but this one felt like too much exhibition too soon. Destroys the characterization of Ali and makes her almost just another Carol. Hope the coming chapters correct that.

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