All Comments on 'She's Leaving Home'

....at the end! Just the right mix of humor, pain, and true love!

This story was just an amusing tale by one of Literotica's more imaginative authors meant to make reader chuckle.

And chuckle I did. Thanks

√&√

Nice example of 'you drink the water you die! You don't drink the water you die!'

Well finessed story.

Absolutely Brilliant! Creative and well written. Where have all the great writers gone?

anon.1

I would of packed ALL her shit, put it in the driveway and given it to her friend. The next day did all the banking, insurance, etc..found a lawyer and divorced her ass. No friggin excuse for what she did.

As in all of HDK's stories, the husband is a dullard, too obtuse and simple-minded to see through his oh-so-clever wife's plan for escaping retribution for cheating on him. We're supposed to believe that the two sisters are far too smart for the troglodyte she married and, by pretending to enact a severe level of punishment for the disloyal wife, they trick the simpleton husband (he's a man after all, he can't be smart) into defending the slut and cancelling all punishment except for something that she likes to do.

I figure she screws around every time she's out of town, but on this occasion something happened that made her think she might get caught. So she enlisted her slut sister to help her fool her unsuspecting, slow-witted husband into giving her a free pass. Aren't they clever and aren't men dumb? Thanks Ms. HDK, you totally met our expectations for one of your stories.

The wife gets fucked and then tells her husband. She takes all the blame and knows how this will affect him. Then she gets her sister into the act and they have the stupid husband completely bambozzeled and he falls for it hook line and sinker...She gets off with a spanking and gets no divorce and gets to keep her wimp and not too smart of a husband. Now she doesn't even have to work any longer...ha ha ha talk about having her cake and eating it to!

. . . nerds.

Don't be so hard on yourself anony.

They missed the whole point of the story, as anyone with an IQ in three figures would have figured out. Dummies, her sister set him up, and maybe her too, although women are more devious than men, and after the sister pointed out to the wife that she was ridiculously throwing away a great marriage, the plot was hatched for it to seem that he made the decision to take her back when it really wasn't. The sister made him see what a great marriage that he had, and gave him an out for the indiscretion. Really a great story with a novel theme.

If I do not know what these stories are about I go to the comments. If it said anything about wimp or cuck I will not read the story. Those two words turn my stomach.

For the spanking only and I wanted to read about her cheating ass turned purple!

Could have been more of a story on this one. It was too complicated for a short.

The piece of shit Boyd needed his due.

The heartless Cunt got away with it and her and her Cunt sister are laughing at what a pathetic loser he is. She rubbed it in his face and all he did was have sex with her. Thats just stupid! She bet her sister that she could do that and he would do nothing. She won the bet and can fuck anyone she wants. horrible story but then who would expecr more from this writer.

It could have happened like so but ...... it's a bit unlikely really isn't it ?

Two people, too much to drink, went to one of their rooms.... jumped into bed together, did the nasty, can't remember doing any of this at that time, but in the morning .... clarity. Really.

Loved the changing point of view stances and semi-logical but hysterical escalation of emotions. Kept me happily entertained !

In my mind it happened just the way she said. He usually goes with her because she can not drink. How her and the other guy ended up in bed drunk was just a royal fuckup on both there parts. I don't believe that her and her sister cooked up anything up. She loved him so much and hated what happened she felt she had to tell him and we all know these scientific type people do not rationalize as others. Liked the story in my favorites 5 stars.

Ron

cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Poor manipulated guy, and he didn't even get revenge on Boyd.

Yet another passive protagonist.

He should at least have fucked the sister.

He realizes that the two sisters played him like a cheap violin. I'll give her points for confessing her one drunken indiscretion (giving her the benefit of the doubt-this time), but she was using reverse psychology on him right off the bat, and enlisted her sister to finish the job. When he came back to "get her stuff," she knew from what sis said that he was ready for the finale. She apologized for not giving him the choice in her punishment, but it was all over, but the spanking by then...and she knew it! So, she spent a couple of days with sis, having a hen party and plotting against poor old hubby, while he stewed in emotional hell of her creation. What a bitch! The poor schmuck doesn't stand a chance...

closet cucks have no sense of humor.

5*

I enjoyed turmoil the husband felt and the happy ending .

Thanks for the read

and nicely original. 5*

five stars. Her actions come across as genuine, and not planned (as some might suggest).

They never slept together. Their competitors had an insider who spiked both their drinks in order to get the team broken up and the project delayed. The semen in her was actually an artificial substance that they sometimes use in porn.

They succeeded in delaying the project, because you, the writer, didn't know.

Keep Margie away from home for a while, hire an investigator to look into industrial espionage, and mix in a lot of twists and quirks along the way.

Good Luck!

If they're good looking that just compounds it and someone closer to "normal" has to intervene for stabilization and a reality check.

Great story and probably close to a "Rainman reality".

BRAVO!!

Gave it a 5

...in a funny way.

...ever heard of two people getting drunk beyond conciousness, waking up next morning, both without the slightest notion how they got there, no memory whatsoever, both usually faithful, now shaken, terrified ans sick to the core - no way!

I´ve been lawyer the last 25 years, tend to BTB-stories and do not tolerate cheating - but a case like this one practically screams to be continued and deeply investigated. Come on, HDK: I know you cannot let this one rest in peace. It is not your style, not the way you usually cope with these things. Please continue (or give permission to try it for you).

...nice plot and nice way of telling it. But I cannot lose the feeling this story is incomplete,,,unfinished.While I cannot get rid of the impression, that nothing really happened and it had been a terrific setup to either destroy both marriages or at least kill Marge´s, you seem to leave little space for this outcome. Character traits as those shown here just do not fit the situation. Something stinks in Denmark, N.Y. or whereever else.

Anyway...4*

He should have gone to the other guys house with all home and told the whole family what happened. Than he should of kicked his ass. Shes a sneaky selfish bitch and worked hubby exactly the way she wanted. Trying to stay married is one thing but the other guys family will have to go through the same after his ass beating

Um, shouldn’t HE be the one to decide if he is willing to forgive her sleeping with another man?

Boyd’s wife and kids don’t deserve it, but HER husband and kids do?

She’s NOT a “cheating bitch” – she apparently had drunken sex one night that she doesn’t even remember. Only died-in-the-wool BTBers would call her a cheating bitch.

“I told her she'd probably find a man that understood her one mistake and could get past it.”

She’s not giving him a CHANCE to understand or get past it!

I realize we wouldn't then have the story, but couldn't she have simply submitted herself to his judgement without all the rigamarole? It didn't seem like he was going to BTB or anything like that.

Did Margie (aka Angie) really need to leave for hubby to come to these same conclusions and reactions? Probably not, but Judy's intervention made the story more interesting. Did Judy really need to pick up a few of Margie's things?

MARGIE MESSED UP BUT SHE HAD HELP. SHE DID THE RIGHT THING BY COMING CLEAN SHE KNEW SHE COULD NOT DRINK MAYBE SOMEONE SPIKED BOTH OF THERE DRINKS. FINALLY SHE LET HER HUSBAND SET THE PUNISHMENT. HE DID NOT WANT TO LOSE HER THEY LOVE EACH OTHER. I BET IF SHE GOES BACK TO WORK AND TO A CONFERENCE SHE WILL NOT DRINK ANYTHING BUT SODA POP.

RON TEXAS

The smart girl was Judy the sister...I believe that the other cheater should have to come clear with it, unless he had someting to hide...

How long can you keep it up?

Sounds like sisterly collusion. Oh well, now that he's had a taste of spanking maybe he'll find other ways to "punish" her. :o)

she works for a drug company??? the nerd vomited apon waking, and isn't telling his wife anything, she doesn't remember a thing, she may or may not have had sex, but believes she did...set-up maybe, or date rape drug,,?

Smart girl, that Margie.

and stupidly silly as well. ****

I've had two friends who were a lot like your character's, both of them incredibly intelligent. But neither had any social skills or a lick of street smarts. Love your stories, if I had a complaint, my only complaint would be. Make them longer!

Any husband in a long term who didn't allow her back is an asshole. It was patently obvious that illicit sex was between two very drunken people. In fact the wife was so drunk she blacked out and didn't remember anything or was it GHB ?

I'd love to meet that guy just after he won the lottery. If he is that easy to manipulate, I'd be a millionaire in under 5 minutes. Clever wife though. She spends the weekend fucking her coworker and then admits it to dumb hubby. She pretends to leave "because she has too much love and respect for him". She then sends her sister round to offend his sensibilities, and hey presto, all is forgiven. She gets to scratch her itch, and doesn't have to worry about covering her tracks or getting caught in a lie. She doesn't have to worry about who saw what, and she gets to keep her lifestyle. She also knows now that her dumb cuck of a husband is too much of a coward to stop her the next time she gets that itch.

After 22 years of marriage, two kids, and a life of nothing but work to pay for it all - this guy has nothing else to live for. His imagination has been shut down. He has been trained to take care of his family, and nothing more. He never really had a choice and the bitch knew it. So, that being said, fuck the other guy - he does not fit into the equation. In fact he would become the lightening rod for the husbands anger and pain. Destroy him and his family. Let him sit in the ashes of his life and watch his wife hate him as his children go bad and turn to drugs, crime and bad behavior. Fuck him. "Forgive" the wife for now, because you have to, but the betrayal will always be there like a slow acting poison killing all the love he had for her. One day he will wake up and the pain will have died along with the love. Then he will be free.

And that makes it AOK. More wimp shite from HDK.

Man, if some of you cannot see these two reconciling, I guess no couple can in your eyes. If the women you want for a relationship are a dime a dozen it seems like you don't want much. I need some help understanding the logic behind burning this bitch.

And so what if the sister used a little reverse psychology. It was a hoot in the story and appeared to be just what he needed.

Furthermore, where did "2 slip ups" come from? In the story I read, there was only one.

Thanks HDK. Most of your stories are good to great. Keep on writing.

Very strange. Good story and original too.

Stupid use of reverse pyschology.

And the second time?? I mean a PERFECT wife, except for (the now) 2 tiny weeny little slip ups that are hardly worth mentioning, right?

Pure crap!

I have to find out how to give NEGATIVE scores!

The negative comments are silly. This is a good story written by a talented author.

This one seems like a set up from the sisters. Normally, I like your stories but this one was anti male in a way.

fucking classic HDN story. it had me rolling. tongue in cheek to perfection. no i did not consider it a cheating wife story - i considerd it a farce - 5

but this one puts them all to shame. Sounds like the sisters set him up. He should go and confront Boyd and his wife. Things seem to pat. Wife decides to leave him, sis badmouths her, hubby takes her back and Boyd is forgotten about. Right. *1*

if she didnt remember she should have filed rape charges and had a drug test done.

otherwise her excuses and reasoning is nothing but lies.

he is a wimp for taking her back without such actions being taken.

and the Pussy controls the options to the cheatee. TK U MLJ LV NV

I thought it was witty & loving ! I loved this story, especially when the sister judy called Margie a slut, & Jim let her have it with both barrels... Ha! I think this was a sweet loving story, the wife made a mistake & upon returning home she immidiately confessed & was even remorseful about her one night stand, she didn't try to put the blame on her husband, she didn't try to justify the one night stand, she didn't try to pull one over her husband, she clearly loves her husband to death, this is where I'm totally for reconciliation. I don't like stories where the cheating wives has been cheating for months , weeks sometimes years & with multiple partners & when caught they try to place the blame on their spouse or they make idiotic excuses as to why the affair started, they try to justify the reasoning for straying i.e , she didn't feel attractive, they felt they were getting old & all the other mindless bullshit cheating cum sluts recites. This wife (Margie) didn't do any of these, she knew she fuck'd up, she understood an affair wasn't going to be tolerated & she accepted full responsibility. She's a keeper Jim. This was truly a loving couple. I like the sister judy I knew what she was doing, she was trying to get an honest reaction out of Jim regarding her sisters one night stand she wasn't trying to sleep with Jim. Judy went home & told Margie about the blow up; if she was really trying to be a backstabbing gutter slut sister she never would've told Margie what happened she did this to show Margie that Jim doesn't think that she's a slut & he still very much loves her... Awesome sister.

All of your characters in this little tale have got to be on drugs. Hell I'm hitting my pipe right now and a bottle of home brew and they still sound like they just stepped off the worst soap that has ever been made for TV. But it is well written.

real man

poor wimp

Thanks for this little gem of a love story

What kind of chemist is she and that coworker? Both wake up nauseous, with memory loss, and don't IMMEDIATELY come to the conclusion that they were drugged? That's what I'd think, and I'm not even in the medical field. Someone probably tagged her while she was out, and then put her in with the passed out coworker. That's my theory.

The little pud pullers do not have the requisite brains to power a sense of humor. This was a humorous tongue in cheek tale made all the funnier by it being so over the top. Some guys, like braindeadone and ped0, are laser-focused on cuckoldry and don't have a funny bone which is good; they don't notice when the world is laughing their asses off at them.

are both like the "Anons" who are always crying "Ditch the bitch!" -- off on an extreme knee-jerk response to what is in this case an inexplicable situation needing careful examination, one neither the "lover" nor the wife wanted, knew was happening, or could tolerate when it happened. As you set it up, most probably someone else drugged both of them, fucked her, and then left them to awaken each to their own self-loathing. But all but the lover act as if it were virtually a passionate affair lasting for months!

You do subtle stories with shrewd wit almost invariably -- surely you see the excessive and inappropriate responses of all concerned here (even the sister-in-law rings false, as if manipulating him but maybe not). Is this whole thing a joke?

This was one of the most original and entertaining stories I've read on this site. Naturally the "torch the bitch" crowd is up in arms but I suspect that most of them haven't a realistic bone in their body to begin with.

First of all, the cheating in this story, while wrong, could be forgiven. The wife messed up to be sure, but the illicit sex was not planned. It was more accident than betrayal. Hell, the wife doesn't even recall the encounter. It's not as if the Earth moved and lightning flashed during a multi-orgasmic interlude. She is overcome with grief and refuses to try and justify her actions. She is determined that she must take the ultimate punishment.

The characters in this story are richly drawn and even the offending party is someone we can't help liking. The most entertaining and interesting character is of course the wife's sister. She is the ultimate armchair therapist, manipulating both her sister and her brother-in-law to the realization that a mistake was made but there was a bedrock of love and fierce devotion between this couple. Her almost comic efforts defuse and help heal this situation that could have destroyed a loving marriage.

I was so impressed by this little tale that I did something I rarely do. I gave it the full five stars and would have given it six if possible. Congratulations on a well written story with a powerful message of love and forgiveness!

He should have just took his way out and got a divorce, maybe tapped the sister. When a woman admits she's wrong like in this story it usually means she's done worse and is using this screw up as cover for the worse stuff. The guy she worked with should have gotten punished as well but instead he gets away scott free.

I loved it! :)

Half an hour since I finished and I'm still laughing. Satire at its best. M

There is way more to these stories than most readers ever get out of them - or maybe I am just to introspective -

I am really thinki8ng there is another motive behind much of your writing d00d lol-

another classic from the master - had me laughing throughout

he should be packing someone's stuff and out the door. TK U MLJ LV NV

Sometimes, some things whiz right over my head. Once in a while, they hit squarely on my forehead. This is one of those stories that if you'd been a sniper, I'd have a third eye-hole perfectly centered.

I had a hearty chuckle over this story.

It is, indeed, a fine piece of writing.

Stars, if he made her tell Boyd's wife he cheated on her, it would have been a 5.

Quite a gem from a master of the genre.

Someone needs to clue Boyd's wife in on this, too. They need to share the pain so to speak. Let his wife figure out whether a whipping will be enough or if more is warranted and will get them past this incident.

I loved the story but still feel somehow cheated on possible storyline developments. Since Margie was totally out of it, just as much as her boss, it could also have been a setup arranged by a competitor to try and indulge in industrial blackmail. It could also have been possible she was a victim of "date rape" and the perp tried to cover up the crime by implicating a drunk boss. Still can't go past a good arse spanking to finish up a story.

I loved it. The sister played them both. She was the only one that was thinking straight.

Would like to read more like this one

He had me going at the beginning... What right did the wife have to cheat and then decide that she was getting a divorce. He has to have some say in the matter. Then I went back and read it over and came to the conclusion that this was a great parody. The not-funny thing is even after a couple of years I can not forget how horrified I was of the straight interpretation of what was the set-up to the tale!

I love the comments from those who rub their balls and get a revelation about what the author intended when her wrote the story. In college the profs kept asking, "What did the author mean?" If the author wanted it to be crystal clear it wouldn't be a story, it would be an essay. Some wives just may need an ass whipping from time to time. Some can be forgiven without the ass whipping. And some men can be manipulated. Don't believe me? Look in a mirror.

Oh please, HDK's stories are so tongue in cheek its pathetic. They are just too damn funny to get upset about. The characters are completely plastic and unbelieveable, and the story lines are just over the top? Come on everybody, can't you see that HDK is having us all on?

HAHAHAHAHAHAH ROTFLMAO!

Nope.

but he loves the creampies

Margie and her sister played him like a cheap fiddle. Once again a strong offence and quick foot work wins. Hit the husband hard fast and unexpectedly don't let him grasp what is going on and then lay the ground work for his down fall.

My stock in HDK is falling quick. Hope he can write better next time.

Wow, what a refreshing story... She was honest with herself and her husband. The thing is about cheating, the lying is actually worse than the infidelity. We are all flawed and often find ourselves doing things we normally would not do, especially when drugs or alcohol are involved. But if we come clean, it usually will be better in the long run. We must face our failure and work to rectify it immediately.

HDK has revolutionized Loving Wives. Before finding him, I read less than 5 LV stories and got tired of same old cheating stuff. But now I can't get enough of HDK's LV..they're so corny and completely absurd..and the endings get wilder and wilder. Someone should make a movie out of these stories and put Robin Williams in it. Take the stories for what they are which is lots of fun..if you want a more serious story where husband & wife leave each other latch on to Just Plain Bob's stories.

Jes lak away, dis puta writer wimp out dem wat bois prety gud.

This is a parody. He is making fun of the LV stories where the husband catches the wife cheating then goes crazy for revenge. This time the wife confesses to one mistake and is very formal and not letting the husband have time to consider what he might: she punished herself. This is satire, humor, something to laugh at and not take so SERIOUS!. In fact, this is great writing and you should appreciate how over the top subtle he is here and what a terrific effort this is.

I usually like all your stuff HDK but listen to what Hullabloo said. What gets the reader riled up more than anything is when the writer lets the other man get off scott free...What is the problem with fucking up his own marriage also....?

You write every story the same, wife fucks around husband gets mad forgives wife even if she screwed the family pet.Anyway i feel sorry for you, you must have had a wife who led you around by the nose and didn't care for you.

Another story that was a waste of ink.

The marriage is destroyed. The wife and husband are both ready for the looney bin. Why didn't he go and punch the guy's lights out and tell his wife and fuck his own happy marriage up like he evidently did to them. What's the fuck is wrong with you people that always let the guy get off free?????

HDK my dad was a big believer of belt punishments it was better than getting your head smacked when you screwed up i bet Margie felt better after the swelling went down on her red ass.ha ha.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

wonderfully creative and original. It's up near the top of the list of HDK's work, and that's saying a lot.

ohio

we had run out of different ways to tell a cheating wife story, count on HDK to come up with a new one.

Your imagination and your willingness to put in the time, talent and energy to tell your story is much appreciated by those who know what it takes to get the job done well. Thanks.

They really are... the whole cheating thing is just too wacko. Do people really get so drunk, they can have sex when they cannot stand up or walk, and wake up the next morning and remember absolutely nothing? Sure they were not drugged and set up?

Just too many loose ends in this one!

Telegraphed from beginning to end and why. No resolution except now you have an unemployed slut wife and the knowledge that her sister is no different..."so fuckin stupid".

A good story teller can take an old tale, turn it and look at a different facet of it. That is what HDK did so well. He then pushed it to the absurd with great humor. Knowing that the main character was being manipulated, he ended it in a similarly unexpected way. Really good story telling.

<p>I sat and thought about it for a day.</p>

<p>Was it because she cheated? No that wasn't it, because while she did she told him she had to leave because if the roles were reversed she would have expected him to leave.</p>

<p>Was it because she blamed others? Nope, she said that even though there was someone else, the blame for drinking too much and ending up in bed with another man was squarely her fault, and she offered no excuse for what happened</p>

<p>So I was stumped as to why I didn't like it. I just couldn't put my finger on why, until I thought about it for most of the day. Then I realized it was because of two things:</p>

<p>1.) The sister manuplated them both to get them back together</p>

<p>2.) While the wife was upset and blamed herself thats all that happened, other than the sister manipulating them both, I just didn't see anything other than her being upset. Saying she's putting the husband first by asking for a divorce was good in all, but she seemed to removed from everything.</p>

<p>By that I mean the wife was upset, or that seemed to be conveyed well, but that was it. I'm sure if the roles were reversed she would want to know what preventative measures the husband would take to prevent this in the future. Quiting her job could have been because she didn't want to face the man who she had sex with. But I just had that nagging in the back of my mind what is she going to do to keep this from possibly happing in the future?</P>

<p>And the sister managing to get the husband to say "It was just sex and there is more to life than that" seems to trivalize what happened for me, but that is just a minor nagging for me</p>

<p>So for the most part I have to say that it was pretty good. Just a few parts seemed to make me wonder, but I did like it. I just needed to walk myself through why. (^_^)</p>

-Risq

Having just about everything backwards was sure different. The humour was great! I kept thinking somehow this will all straighten out and it did with about 4 sentences left in the story. I thought there was going to be some way out that she DIDN'T have sex but that didn't come about. He was really right, they were all weird. A really entertaining story!

When I read that the wife was very truthful about her indiscretion to the extent that she even extracted punishment on herself, I was skeptical. Then she declared that her cohort in crime was just as remorseful and my assessment of the situation did a 180 turn.

This story is similar in some respects to a PAPATOAD story “Telephone Blitz” (unfortunately no longer on this site). In both stories the cheaters are naive about their tryst and extremely remorseful afterwards.

There is such a childlike quality to the wife’s behavior here that any husband would have difficulty executing a harsh response. The behavior of all concerned is way way over the top…yet this is still a fun read.

It was fun to read this story and I chuckled at the humor. You also are on your way to getting as many comments as Nici, although they are at the opposite end of the spectrum, for the most part. I too wonder about a date rape drug. Maybe both the wife and Boyd were set up by someone at work who dislikes them, or who wants the next promotion, or whatever. The idea that neither of them remembers being in bed with each other until awakening in the morning is nicely satiric, but if it actually happened, it would make you wonder about a set up (or Margie's lying about it). Keeping a bit of the fluids from her "well-used pussy" could also tell if Boyd was the perp, or someone else (in which case, she was raped). The only thing you left out, HDK, was Hubbie planning a tryst to be equal.

Wasnt the funniest hdk story I ever read but some of his stories are really damn funny. Funny but not the funniest of hdk's stories still leaves lots of room for a really good story, which is what this was.<p><p>

This one still had me laughing out loud in a few spots and that way above the average. Sometimes I chuckle and sometimes I grin but I dont actually lol often when reading stories. <p><p>

Thanks very much for writing.

I do think that Hdk's rapier like wit is just too sharp - and pointed - for some.

I also believe, quite sincerely, that if one's mind is orthogonal to anything remotely related to that of a sane person's the appreciation of the witty humor and razor edged dialog is greatly enhanced.

Kudos, Hdk!

Regards, Jack

Next time I fuck around on my wife, I'm gonna pull that same shit! The slut is absolutely brilliant in her attack, but she was wrong when she said; "You're a man, not some spineless pussy......" she knew exactly what he was! Not only a wimp and a spineless pussy, but an IDIOT! I'll bet she cried crocodile tear all the way to the next business trip. Fucking brilliant writing, a whorror story of exquisite terror and deception.

Why would I ever want to deny the authenticity of a story made by my favorite author, huh? Especially a wonderful, zany, tongue in chick parody of almost every thing that comes to mind when you think about Loving wives clichés as this one?

At times, I’ll admit, I care to support my comments with examples from the text (something that many choose not to do). On the other hand if I praise one of HDK’s stories “too much” someone else will be sure to show from another corner and cast some other accusation which makes similar sense. I guess I’ll just have to just stick to saying what I think about each story with as little as possible unnecessary distractions.