All Comments on 'Shhh! Dad's Asleep'

by Wyden Long

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Excellent!!!

Good write...would like to read a second story...very Hot...If only my little girl would be so generous

alavo16alavo16about 15 years ago
HOT!

this was so good. love your work. keep it up!

nonkel___bobnonkel___bobabout 13 years ago
Genious

The idea of the so-called sleeping father is so hot.

My imagination goes wild.

Hunter2013Hunter2013over 10 years ago
jesus! this is a total favorite!

You should make a ch. 02 to this puppy!

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 10 years ago
Loved the first page

Loved the first page it was so hot, then it got fucked up with dad sucking cock so I dropped you down from a five to a three stars.

pervdoodpervdoodover 9 years ago
I damn near came

when daddy started sucking cocks! That jumped my rating to ten stars, but had to settle for only five stars {max allowed}.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
My time with my daughter

Makes me wish I could go back to when my daughter (14) and I enjoyed each other for over three years !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
julies panties

oh oh ohhh julie im im oh im cumming nin to your panties alot of loads they are vwet with cum i;ll let them dry and put them back in your clean lingerie drawer to wear ohhh jules i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
usa crap...

bye!

nylonpunkienylonpunkieover 2 years ago

It read like a stream-of-consciousness dialogue poem, adored all the plot twists and the relentless pace, xx

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