All Comments on 'Shish Boom Ma? Ch. 03'

by Shoreman76

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I just hope that...

....that he's not biting off more snatch than he can chew!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Too Abrupt

You Have a good Plot; By shortening the story you have missed an oppertunity of a really great Story.

Reccomend that you spend more Time and effort on the seduction and "SEX" scenes.

RP

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