All Comments on 'Shish Boom Ma?'

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steve8576steve8576almost 18 years ago
TEASE!!!

So far, I love it. BUT IT WAS TOO SHORT! PLEASE make future chapters longer!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Gotta see more

Whoa, great, just not enough

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
panty prob

Ma got her panties off but seconds later they had to be pulled to one side???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
What!!!????

What!!!???? THAT"S IT?!?!? Don't leave us hanging like that

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
WEAK

It was pretty weak.... it was like u had an idea but didnt know what to do with it ....... so u didnt do anything with it. Next time think it out before u start and maybe u can finish it.

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Good, but could be better

I don't normally like lezbo action, but this one holds some promise. Perhaps you will knock up your step-mom in a future chapter? And then go on to give your girlfriend your baby, too?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
bullshit

that's why women are whores because they always got for stupid dykes everyone knows woman always lie to men they always cheat on there boyfriend with another pussy bitch because they are brain less

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