All Comments on 'Shit Happens'

The daughter should have had her mother arrested for assault!

ZK

Massive slut ray. Not even from Mars. Maybe Neptune.

Simply not believable. From wedded bliss to a raving whore over night. Nope ! Like others have said, too large holes to bridge. 2-for effort. No-😊’s

Such proper language. Could have been better with real emotional language

Weak dialogue, nothing new

Great story and well-written. Fun reading about Alison getting just desserts.

Ed

Good idea. Bad plot and poor development of the story. Shallow characters.

Thanks Matt. I like when you write these snap-shot stories. You tell a great tale in these very few pages. Not that it matters but 5&FAV

Who the heck was Bethany.

Great story!

5

It really sucks but Dave had refused to see (like most) the character flaws in that pig he was married to, believe me they were there.

No one turns that cruel and mean spirited in a year or so, unless of mental illness of course.

But wishing a person would just die, and on top of that saying it to her own daughter! But no because her aunt has the same character flaws, I could never say to a stranger let alone a niece or nephew of mine "what are you doing calling this late" when it was apparent that person was clearly upset

I don't get the sudden change in personality. I always hate that when it isn't explained. Jesus why stick around if you're immediately going to tell your daughter you hope her father/your husband dies while he's in the hospital.

And honestly, no way they get married and the dude doesn't find out her age.

Fun read but lots of disconnects

A smooth five star story.

PS Anonymous: Bethany is Dean's wife.

So Dean, after finding out that Alison lied to him about Katie's age and likely her own age, still stayed with Alison? He was THAT stupid? And after having to pay out millions of dollars due to their illicit affairs, the company did not fire their asses? Sorry, but the story just gets more lame.

Nice story until the flash ending. I guess you got tired of the story before your readers. Too bad. 3 stars.