All Comments on 'Shooting Stars'

Nothing new or erotic here.

If it took another guy to get my wife off I don't think that would be a turn on, this would end badly.

Kudos for the great beginning and apologies for the punny comment title. Your words placed the reader at the hot tub. Your descriptive phrases almost enabled one to feel the various sensations enjoyed by the trio. Continue your craft.

I always enjoy hearing the womans side of a sharing situation.

I feel like I was there.... Thanks

Wow, this is so hot, I just about got off myself. Your imagery is amazing.