All Comments on 'Short Story: A Mother's Family'

Fuck her real good daddy.

Ok. We can see the husband/father is demanding, perhaps abusive and gets away with behavior most women wouldn't permit, but what redeems him with the wife and daughter? The story would've improved considerably for me if he was shown to be a caring, loving fellow. That could've been in the story without lengthening it, as you like to keep your stories short.

I'm glad you didn't place the story in the BDSM category because it would barely qualify. I know whereof I speak.

Let's call it a stroke story, and perhaps an adequate one, barely.

great short stroke story. I too tend to skip the multiple page offerings, especially when I'm just looming to bust a quick nut. well done.

I agree that it would be great to be able to find short stories when we want to. Sometimes I just want something to get me excited and don't have time to read through 4 pages of background. As for the concern expressed in some comments about the father's behaviour, this is a story about submission. It may be behaviour that most women would not allow, and which would be considered unacceptable to most, but in the context of the story it fits perfectly. If a woman has been raised to be submissive she would accept it as normal behaviour. In real life I would never allow a man to treat me that way and certainly would not tolerate having it done to my daughter. But it makes for a very interesting story. :)

I for one loved the story. I am a woman and I do love to be treated like that every now and then. Obviously under the context of being with someone I trust. There are plenty of people like me that derive pleasure from pain and also love to be called names. I do no think a story should be judged on the content, but in the writing and pacing of the story itself. Perhaps a warning in the beginning that the story contains consensual pain would have saved you from some of the comenters here. If they had read it it would have been their own fault. Please write more stories like this, you have plenty of people that do like it.

that is fucking sick

for a good story effort t and contnet

There is Pride in knowing that there is others in the world that likes this type of story and I am happy that someone writes about them I just hope that these are true.

more could've been added to this, and made into a 'long story'. Ended too quick, which just made it into Mom watching, & helping, Dad rape his daughter, and then that was it. (even though I know that this is not what was the story implied)