All Comments on 'Show Me Yours, I'll Show You Mine'

Please continue writing this story as well as others like it.

It was pretty great, except for the Ryan bit, was that necessary? Hot sex scene though. I need to find myself a drunkish bi-curious birthday girl with some sexy lingerie to trap in the bathroom;)

loved it. the ryan bit was great for your male readers. These are the short sweet stories that take some skill to craft. excellent job.

Hot and I liked the pace.

Damn that's hot! Great paced and makes me just want to turn off the tv, send the kid to bed, turn the lights down, read and see what happens ;)

Not enough ... Sex. Too much of a quickie. Why can't there be more seduction ? Ryan should have found them and had a threesome. Didn't make me horny at all

"The Blitzkrieg Bop" was written by the Ramones, who are AMERICAN. Jeez. Get your facts straight.

I liked this,was pretty erotic and got me standing,looking for part 2 with the man and both girls. Keep it up