by notnice66
Loved this story and the way that you kept the reader engaged.
I have started to experiment with pee in my writings also although yet to experience much in real life, it is an area that fascinates me.
Summore
You definitely are not nice, Alicia! Great story - rough, nasty and hot. Piss porn is a big turn on for me and I really appreciated the filth of this . More piss stories please!
A really good story. You included several of my favourite things and presented it al excellently. Thanks.
very hot - but one thumb down for using the word 'dugs' to refer to breasts....
I read this one over and over again.... always makes me horny. Scuse me, got to go to the bathroom for a piss and finger fuck.
I have read every one of your stories and love them all. It's funny how dirty stuff turns us on so. Love your pissing episodes and buttfucking into poo. I notice you haven't written for a while, love to read something new.
really nice!! your writing style is high quility. easy to read. my wish is to meet you sometime
Now I gotta go clean up this mess... thanks!
This is absolutely the hottest peeplay story I have ever read (and I think I've read 'em all LOL)
First story I read from this author, now to go check out the rest!
Lovely writing, had me cumming before I reached the end of the story. Wow, a story to remember the next time I'm with my girlfriend.
this was such a turn-on. you really know how to write about toilet sex! i haven't had this kind of really dirty out-of-control sex since i've gotten knocked up. i'm showing this story to my bf and hope we can do much of the same nasty fucking in a few weeks - would love to have him nurse me and then piss on my face.
One of the hottest watersports stories I've read. Always helps things when alcohol is involved too.