All Comments on 'Shy'

Went to a place I did not expect. Just offbeat enough to be totally true. I'll think about this one after I move on to other stories--and that's about the best you can do with story here.

Even so it was a good read. Not having been overly shy myself though, I did find myself wanting to scream at Peter at times.

Thank You Ronnie W.

I've never left a comment before. I never expect to leave one again. However, this story compelled me to comment. Great characterization. Moving, in a way. You have some real talent.

Well done! The ending was kind of a kick - I don't think he will be shy much longer! Everyone has something beautiful about them if we take the time and trouble to see it, to look for it!

Great story & so true. I have been and still am shy.. Generally people wouldn't believe that. I can be voluble, except around a girl(in my youth)and now a woman I find attractive. Seldom does a shy boy/man encounter a girl/woman welling to be aggressive enough to break through the shell.

This is one of the nicest stories I have read on here or other sites. Being a very shy person myself I wish something like this could happen in real life to me.

I loved this story and is a comforting read for a shy guy, the characters were lovable and weird which is fantastic characterization. The ending is awesome, my only regret is that it ended so soon !

This story is very-very touching...

This story is very-very touching...

this is a faboulous sexy story i really enjoyed it - Martin

Very original plot line.

This guy is an extrovert compared to me. I too closely identified with "shy". Ladies, let's just say your comments to young guys shape their self image for the remainder of their life. This guy got lucky. Some of us never do.

Sorry but this was some stupid boring frustrating bullshit. I actually got to a point where I wanted him to get his balls ripped off in some kinda accident because he sure didn't need them. The whole lesbian part was not needed and didn't add anything to the story but actually took away from Beth's character. Like most writers when in doubt or creating a character that isn't cookie cutter supermodel type give her a lesbian phase and have the guy be totally ok with that and ever think it's hot as fuck. Gave you a pity 2 stars.

A very well written "shy" fantasy. Thank you.